will we ever go
to that island on
lake michigan
off the coast
and far away
and this is not a chance
and not a change of pace
or a time to die
in that quiet place
damn it
you're far too young
to waste away
you've still got four kids
and three wedding days
and now we'll never go
to that island in the sand
that we passed months ago
when you were a better man
and if i'm alone, then you're alone
and if i'm afraid, then you're afraid
28 November 2013
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I am immediately drawn in by the form of this piece. No capitalization or punctuation. Short lines that are clearly deliberate. Just the aesthetics alone suit the vague subject matter.
ReplyDeletePersonally my mind is working toward the question "who is Bradley?" Especially after the closing couplet.
good lyrics - wanna hear it
ReplyDeletebard - thanks man. its my style and the style of the music.
ReplyDeletealgor - i'll shoot out stuff when it gets recorded!