“I
remember the last thing I saw before I went blind. It was one of the Colossus,
a massive herculean giant, fifty feet tall, hoisting a great lens up over his
head in the burning orange of the setting sun. I couldn’t take my eyes off him,
frozen in awe, or maybe fear, I can’t say now which was stronger. He stood
higher than most of the buildings of our city, and his face was sullen,
emotionless, unmoved by the mayhem and destruction he would reap by obeying the
commands of his director. He just hoisted to his shoulder the large monocle-like
glass the size of a small parachute, wreathed in gold and tungsten, and turned
it slowly in a circle. As he turned the glass it focused the rays of the sun on
anything in its gaze. Churches burst into flame. Playgrounds melted to boiling
molten puddles. Rows of houses, entire city blocks, shriveled and shrank into
the earth under a glowing furious heat. I watched from the hill. I couldn’t
move. Those who remained in the streets turned and fled. They were the wise
ones. Yes, I am lucky to have lived, to have lost only my sight, but foolish to
have stayed. As the Colossus’ beam turned the corner toward me, he faltered. He
lost his grip on the glass. And I stared too long. As he adjusted his hands, each
one the size of a small car, on the edges of the glass, it quickly jerked and
swept past me. In a way, it swept through me. I did not erupt into flames. I
did not melt. I did not char. With a great white flare, the light reached the
back of my mind and stayed. And then there was nothing. Which is exactly what I
have seen since that day. Nothing.”
29 December 2013
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I am really enjoying your prose broheme. What if you took one of the "nouns" being melted and described the event in detail. The playground just begs for a moment by moment description. It gives the event another layer of depth, and provides you another opportunity to inject meaning and metaphor.
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